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icarus.

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envious of the birds, i built wings..
        my knees ached with anticipation.
jealous of their ability to soar, i too, soared
        it seemed the butterflies in my stomach lifted me.
greedy for more than just that, i flew higher.
        with every flap of my wings, the sun grew larger.
and for my greed, my wax wings melted,
        i plummeted down to the sea below.
as i fell, i knew:
i was never a bird, i would never fly.
        i should have listened.
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critique question:
how does this make /you/ feel? jealous of something stupid? guilty? .~.

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piguer0's avatar
"ficle bitch" that kill me lol
good poem a lot of feeling on it